1. Can you say you understand how a simple break heals after reading this?
2. What would you change to make this better?
3. What is something you don’t like about this?
4. Is this more helpful than looking it up on your own?
Phoebe – Project #1, Draft #2
Design For Understanding 
1. Can you say you understand how a simple break heals after reading this? Yes
2. What would you change to make this better? Maybe use the phrase “human intervention” instead of just “intervention” (with that last sentence @ the top); make it less vague & state clearer your point that one doesn’t need assistance from other people with this kind of break.
3. What is something you don’t like about this? Could barely read the tiny font w/o zooming in; as soon as the photo first loaded I felt a bit overwhelmed w/ all the information.
4. Is this more helpful than looking it up on your own? Definitely! 🙂
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1. Can you say you understand how a simple break heals after reading this? Yes!
2. What would you change to make this better? I would just fix a few grammar/continuity errors. At “Hard Callus Formation”, you capitalize “Woven Bone” but don’t do it elsewhere. You also capitalize “hematoma” at one point, and I think that’s meant to be lowercase? Also, I would add “(OBR)” after “Osteoclast Bone Resorption”, because after that you start using the acronym. And maybe bold the medical terms that you define just to make them stand out a bit more to the reader?
3. What is something you don’t like about this? The lack of spacing and small text makes it very difficult to read, so I would just break it up a bit more or reduce the amount of words.
4. Is this more helpful than looking it up on your own? Yes, definitely. Very informative! Also, I wanted to add that the hierarchy is very strong making it easy for the eyes to follow.
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