Draft 3_Tan Vu
I experimented with several different layouts and changed the font and icon sizes to make it more consistent. This is not complete as I still need to figure out what information to put in the empty spaces. The margin is also still messed up as I decided to fix it in the end because it's …
Lindsey’s Project Draft 3
This is the next iteration of my visual. For the final submission, I would like to change how the interaction between factors diagram looks, and I have to find data to include for socioeconomic status. Any suggestions in either of those areas or another would be greatly appreciated!
Project 1 Sophie G Draft 3
For my feedback, I'd most like help knowing whether my use of white space is more effective here, whether pictures and text are still competing, and whether the timeline is clear. Do you know where to start and end? Also, I have two drafts, one with multiple colors for my timeline vs. one with a …
New Draft 2- Hannah
Natashia Project 1: Draft 3
I realized that I really wanted to highlight the "What Causes This Variation" section, so I tried to do that in the first one by keeping my design relatively the same and adding a background color for emphasis, and in the second design by making that section a column instead. Which do you guys like …
Blog Post #2: Sophie Project 1 Draft 2
For my second draft, I was really concerned with establishing my content and filling in the graphs I had left in my first draft. I also wanted to use color more effectively. The most notable change is how the content is now organized. I thought a timeline was a better way to organize my narrative …
Natashia Project 1: Draft 2 Feedback
The main changes I made between this and my first draft was revamping the middle section and choosing only four major locations to represent; making a dotted line before the fourth section to suggest that it is a sub-section of the third; aligning the bottom boxes with the grid; changing all subtitle font to be …
Hannah Scott- Draft 2
Women are the invisible victims of PTSD What message does this information graphic convey to you? What information stands out to you? Did you learn anything from this information design? What did you not like about this design? Any specific information that confused you? How could I appeal to a large audience under the theme …
Sophie Garcia Project 1- Draft 2
Love dogs? Here's how they're helping sustainability in Mongolia! Please let me know if you see anything that could be improved in the content or design.
